13 Feb Writing Renewal Letters that Raise More Money
13 February 2024
By David Allen, Development for Conservation
Those of you who have followed me or followed this blog over the years will recognize that I am a disciple of the “longer letters raise more money” cult. I’m planning to go off on the topic again next week. But this week, I want to punctuate that larger topic by leading with the exception:
Renewals are different. They are structured differently and written such that three simple messages come through easily and quickly:
How long the recipient has been a member;
How much they gave last year; and
How much you are asking that they give this year.
Unlike recruitment and appeal letters, renewal letters aren’t complicated. They are short and to the point. That’s because the tone of the letter is one of expectation and assumption.
Your organization already represents one of the causes that meets their personal values and priorities. They gave last year and the year before. In fact they’ve given about this time every year since the 1990s.
It’s time to “renew.”
We don’t need to overly complicate renewal letters with facts and figures and accomplishments and long-winded explanations of new projects. We don’t need pictures or graphics. They already know. They already want to give again. They don’t need to be convinced again from scratch. They are already “sold.” They just need you to make it easy.
The letter should be warm and personable. It should be personalized. It should list board members and key staff down the side of the letterhead (Board Directors give organizations credibility). It should get to the point quickly (in the first paragraph). It should express appreciation for last’s year’s gift and mention how long they’ve been members. It should ask for a specific amount of money. It should have a PS note. And it should all fit on a single sheet of paper, perhaps using both front and back.
It is good practice to rewrite your renewal letters at least once each year, and February is a great time to do that. Good renewal letters written now should last through the end of the year with only minor changes to the first paragraph. Touch upon the theme you’ve decided upon for the year. Tell a short story.
And regarding the ask: the majority of your donors gave less than $100 last year. Asking for $100 this year (in a first renewal letter) is not unfair, and if you do so, the effort will return a great deal more money than asking for the same amount, a lesser amount, or an unspecified amount. (Hold your nose and trust me on this one.)
I hope it is obvious, but just in case it isn’t … you should ask in the first letter for a renewal gift just a bit higher than what they gave last year. So for donors who gave MORE than $100 last year, ask for $150, or $250, or $500 – you get the idea. This $100 ask recommendation is ONLY for those donors who gave less than $100 last year.
Member Since 2012
Last December, Bob and Ann Smith completed a deal that conserved about two-thirds of their wooded property along the lakeshore. This conservation success was made possible by people like you who helped sustain Land Trust through your annual membership contributions. When the Smiths were ready, Land Trust was there. On behalf of everyone here at Land Trust, I want to say thank you! so much for your membership support.
Please renew at this time. Help Land Trust be there for the next landowner who wants to protect their land.
Last year you renewed your membership with a generous gift of $50. Thank you so much!
This year, please consider a gift of $100 or more this year to accelerate the pace of conservation work locally. If you are in a position to consider a significantly larger gift, please be as generous as possible. If $100 is not in the cards, please consider an amount that is more comfortable for you. No gift is too small to make a difference in land conservation!
By renewing today, you help make important conservation work possible and right here, close to home. So, please take a moment to use the enclosed form to renew your annual commitment to Land Trust.
And thank you in advance for your continued support!
P.S. Thank you for considering a gift of $100 or more to support land conservation in [State or Region]!
Should you invite people to give online? – Absolutely. You might even include a QR code that will take them to a renewal landing page. But be careful that the landing page does not undermine the request you’ve made in the letter. For example, don’t ask for $500 and then send someone to a landing page that starts with $35. You will need a different landing page for every ask denomination. That’s OK. It’s not hard, and you have time – it’s only February!
So now that you’ve written one, write two more along the same themes. (Donors responding to the first letter will not receive the second or third.)
The second letter’s message is also short and sweet. “This is just a quick note to remind you that your membership with Land Trust expires this month. I want to thank you for your membership support last year and encourage you to renew at this time.”
In fact, you can use almost the same language from there. It’s a reminder, not a completely new letter! Again the ask is specific and based on what they gave last year. And again, be sure to mention what they gave last year. “In 2023, you contributed $50 as your membership gift. Please consider a gift of $100 or more this year.”
The first letter can be sent a month before their renewal month. The second can be mailed in their renewal month.
And a third letter can be mailed a month later. This time, the message is all about not letting their membership lapse. The language is just a bit stronger and more urgent.
Member Since 2012
Your membership with Land Trust expired last month! Please take a moment right now to bring it current.
By renewing today, you help make important conservation work possible and right here, close to home. Dues provide critical support for Land Trust and deliver proven conservation options to a growing list of private landowners and priority projects. As a member, you help make the mission – [insert your mission statement] – a reality.
So, please take a moment to use the enclosed form to renew your annual commitment to Land Trust. Your renewal gift of any amount is both highly appreciated and highly leveraged through foundation and public grants. Last year you gave $50. Please consider a similar amount this year.
Thank you in advance for your continued support!
P.S. Thank you for considering a gift to renew your support of land conservation in [State or Region]!
- Use at least 12-point type and one-inch margins (if you have too many words, cut the number of words instead of making it tinier and harder to read)
- Don’t use graphics or embedded pictures – they are distracting
- Keep it to one sheet of paper – use the back if needed
- Separate the three letters by four to five weeks
- Track the number and percentage response to each letter and average gift for year-to-year comparisons
This routine should work regardless of your renewal frequency. Do you renew everyone at the same time each year? Twice a year? Quarterly? Monthly? Keep the letters short and follow-up relatively quickly to get to a 70-75% renewal rate.
Can you accomplish the same results using only email messages. Frankly, I’ve not seen it happen. And I’ve been told more than once that a donor found it really easy to ignore multiple email renewal notices, but responded right away when they received a letter. Letters simply carry more weight.
I think that you SHOULD send email. But send it in addition to letters, not instead of letters.
I’d love to hear about your experience. Leave me your stories (and your questions) in the comments below.
Cheers and Have a Good Week!
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